Sunday, February 3, 2013

Time of My Life

On Friday I used most of my time thinking about my SMART goal, and discussing it. I finally decided that my goal would involve my daily routine. Recently I have been lazy and straying from my normal motivated self. My goal is to make it to the end of the year with at least a 4.0 and with money in my pocket from scholarships. This will help me plan for my transition into college.

Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Dickens Map

1) Get most of the reading finished over the weekend. Review main characters and plots in the book, and then write what could be remembered of both.

2) Five AP Questions that seem challenging to myself:

1: In many works of literature, a main character has a mentor or mentor-like acquaintance whose influence dramatically changes how the character views not only himself or herself, but the world as well. Choose a novel or play in which a mentor exhibits such a strong influence, either beneficial or harmful, on one of the main characters. Then, in a well-organized essay, discuss the nature of the mentor's influence and its significance to the work as a whole. 

2:One of the strongest human drives seems to be a desire for power. Write an essay in which you discuss how a character in a novel or a drama struggles to free himself or herself from the power of others or seeks to gain power over others. Be sure to demonstrate in your essay how the author uses this power struggle to enhance the meaning of the work.

3:At every stage in the progress of his tale the novelist must rely on what may be called the illuminating incident to reveal and emphasize the inner meaning of each situation. Illuminating incidents are the magic casements of fiction, its vistas on infinity. Choose a novel or play that you have studied and write a well-organized essay in which you describe an "illuminating" episode or moment and explain how it functions as a "casement," a window that opens onto the meaning of the work as a whole. Avoid mere plot summary.

4: In a literary work, a minor character, often known as a foil, possesses traits that emphasize, by contrast or comparison, the distinctive characteristics and qualities of the main character. For example, the ideas or behavior of the minor character might be used to highlight the weaknesses or strengths of the main character. Choose a novel or play in which a minor character serves as a foil to a main character. Then write an essay in which you analyze how the relation between the minor character and the major character illuminates the meaning of the work.

5:Some novels and plays seem to advocate changes in social or political attitudes or in traditions. Choose such a novel or play and note briefly the particular attitudes or traditions that the author apparently wishes to modify. Then analyze the techniques the author uses to influence the reader's or audience's views. Avoid plot summary.

3) With knowledge of the book I am reading, I think i will be able to give a knowledgeable review of the characters of the story, their connection to the plot, and how Dickens portrays these characters to make them appear more believable.

Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Poem Analysis


THE WEARY BLUES
BY LANGSTON HUGHES
 I heard a Negro play.
Down on Lenox Avenue the other night
By the pale dull pallor of an old gas light     
 He did a lazy sway. . . .      
To the tune o’ those Weary Blues.
With his ebony hands on each ivory key
He made that poor piano moan with melody.      
O Blues!Swaying to and fro on his rickety stool
He played that sad raggy tune like a musical fool.      
Sweet Blues!Coming from a black man’s soul.      
O Blues!In a deep song voice with a melancholy tone
I heard that Negro sing, that old piano moan—    
  “Ain’t got nobody in all this world,     
 Ain’t got nobody but ma self.      
I’s gwine to quit ma frownin’     
 And put ma troubles on the shelf.”
Thump, thump, thump, went his foot on the floor.
He played a few chords then he sang some more—    
  “I got the Weary Blues      
And I can’t be satisfied.     
 Got the Weary Blues      
And can’t be satisfied—      
I ain’t happy no mo’    
  And I wish that I had died.”
And far into the night he crooned that tune.
The stars went out and so did the moon.
The singer stopped playing and went to bed
While the Weary Blues echoed through his head.
He slept like a rock or a man that’s dead.

Analysis:
Tone: The author of this poem uses an appreciative tone, acknowledging the artistic value of Blues and those who have musical talent.

Theme: In this poem we see that Blues played a big part in the author's life, or the life of those it influenced. The theme would be to have a better understanding of the music you study so that one may have connections to it in their own life.

Syntax: The other splits the poem with lyrics of the singer, and then the words of the narrator, it is in this that we are able to see a connection to the lyrics, through a solemn tone, and the speaker, who is unidentifiable.

Diction: The words the narrator use suggest that he has a connection with Blues, and the culture of the Blues, through his use of a Southern accent, where the first African Americans had developed Blues from Gospel Music, and slave songs.
Those Winter daysBY ROBERT HAYDENSundays too my father got up early
and put his clothes on in the blueblack cold,
then with cracked hands that ached
from labor in the weekday weather made
banked fires blaze. No one ever thanked him.
I’d wake and hear the cold splintering, breaking.

When the rooms were warm, he’d call,
and slowly I would rise and dress,
fearing the chronic angers of that house,
Speaking indifferently to him,
who had driven out the cold
and polished my good shoes as well.
What did I know, what did I know
of love’s austere and lonely offices?


Analysis:

Tone: The author uses a very forlorn tone, indicating the loneliness and sadness of the characters with words like, "blueblack" and "splintering cold". The darkness can be seen in our imagination.

Theme: In this poem we see that the author's intention was to show the work of a laborer, and to show the feelings of work, through the warm and the cold, and to express the inner feelings of those people who go through grueling work and expect nothing. They work simply because they have to.

Syntax: A reader can notice how the author splits the feelings of being alone and cold, and then explains the things that are what the worker is voluntarily missing.

Diction: His use of highly descriptive adjectives help the reader understand the feelings of the speaker, and how he perceives his father doing this work. The father may not feel this, but the son sees his father doing work, describing it as "without thanks".


Do Not go gentle into that good night
BY DYLAN THOMAS

Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,   
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray,
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.


Analysis:

Tone: The author uses an  insightful tone, describing his thoughts which contradict, showing the confusion in the meaning of night.

Theme: I see the author as comparing life and death. His description of Wild men who don't notice that death is creeping upon them until they see it overwhelm, then grieve it on it's departure.

Syntax: The author splits the views of each man by key lines, "Rage, rage against the dying of the light."

Diction: Thomas is able to develop a sense of understanding in the character by using many contrasting words and sentences. This helps the audience compare the confusion between feelings in real life, and those described by the author.


the second coming
BY WILLIAM BUTLER YEATS

The falcon cannot hear the falconer;
Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold;
Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,
The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere   
The ceremony of innocence is drowned;
The best lack all conviction, while the worst   
Are full of passionate intensity.
Surely some revelation is at hand;
Surely the Second Coming is at hand.   
The Second Coming! Hardly are those words out   
When a vast image out of Spiritus Mundi
Troubles my sight: somewhere in sands of the desert   
A shape with lion body and the head of a man,   
A gaze blank and pitiless as the sun,   
Is moving its slow thighs, while all about it   
Reel shadows of the indignant desert birds.   
The darkness drops again; but now I know   
That twenty centuries of stony sleep
Were vexed to nightmare by a rocking cradle,   
And what rough beast, its hour come round at last,

 Slouches towards Bethlehem to be born?

Analysis:

Tone: Centralizing the tone on suspense and intense description help the reader see the urgency of the author, imagining end times and distress.

Theme: The theme of this poem is that the failure of life will be indicated by the unnatural events that occur. The author uses these events to develop uneasy feelings in the reader, which are unusual and unnerving.

Syntax: Yeats uses the first half of his poem to describe the occurances of end times and how we might see it and notice it. The second half imagines humanistic reactions, fearful and confused in their desperation for normality.

Diction: The author speaks like a prophetic document, indications and references to religious text help the speaker's authentication of words spoken. Using an enlightened character helps the reader look at the text from the perspective of one being informed.


OUT, OUT
BY ROBERT FROST
The buzz saw snarled and rattled in the yard
And made dust and dropped stove-length sticks of wood,
Sweet-scented stuff when the breeze drew across it.
And from there those that lifted eyes could count
Five mountain ranges one behind the other
Under the sunset far into Vermont.
And the saw snarled and rattled, snarled and rattled,
As it ran light, or had to bear a load.
And nothing happened: day was all but done.
Call it a day, I wish they might have said
To please the boy by giving him the half hour
That a boy counts so much when saved from work.
His sister stood beside him in her apron
To tell them ‘Supper.’ At the word, the saw,
As if to prove saws know what supper meant,
Leaped out at the boy’s hand, or seemed to leap—
He must have given the hand. However it was,
Neither refused the meeting. But the hand!
The boy’s first outcry was a rueful laugh,
As he swung toward them holding up the hand
Half in appeal, but half as if to keep
The life from spilling. Then the boy saw all—
Since he was old enough to know, big boy
Doing a man’s work, though a child at heart—
He saw all was spoiled. ‘Don’t let him cut my hand off—
The doctor, when he comes. Don’t let him, sister!’
So. But the hand was gone already.
The doctor put him in the dark of ether.
He lay and puffed his lips out with his breath.
And then—the watcher at his pulse took fright.
No one believed. They listened to his heart.
Little—less—nothing!—and that ended it.
No more to build on there. And they, since they
Were not the one dead, turned to their affairs.

Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Henry V: Speech Remix

During class today, I got the idea to interpret the speech into my own words, it may not be correct so I am asking if anyone sees anything that can be fixed comment! P.S. (I know it is wrong in a lot of places!)
(It is just an exercise)

Henry V by William Shakespeare

King:

Who are you to judge them, and wish for aid?
You, my cousin? No, not you;
But if we are to die soon we will do
our country service; if we live,
the greater praise for heroes of battle.
Only God knows! But let him not take another.
By Jove, I do not crave gold,
nor care who seeks me for riches;
it doesn't bother me if you are of them;
such things do not phase me.
But if coveting honor is sinful,
I shall burn in hell.
Have faith in yourself, my cousin.
For the love of God! I would not give
my honor to another man where I have
honor to be gained. My hopes are still high;
though not another man show.
For if the desire to fight is not there, then do not
force him to partake in killing;
He is not worthy of death by the sides of just men,
This day is called the feast of Crispian.
Those who live past this day will look back,
in old age, and dine with his neighbors proclaiming,
"Tomorrow is the feast of Saint Crispian."
Then strip the cloth from his body to reveal the scars
that so heroic a man has earned.
The names of the man that fought by myself and eachother
will be remembered forever as brethren.
And through joyous party remember this day with fine drink,
the story be told as that of a life lesson from father to son.
We are the few. We are the happy few.
We are a band forged of brothers.
On this day, I will fight shoulder to shoulder with any man,
may he be a thief, drunk, defiler;
This day he shall be a brother, and all the men in England,
now asleep in bed, be thinking themselves accursed to not
have been apart of a glorious day. They will believe themselves
no longer worthy of life, when
those who fought remember Saint Crispin's day.

Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Spring Semester Plan 1

As the Semester continues I plan on:

  • Holding my integrity to my school work and into everything I do
  • Pass the AP exam with above a 3
  • Continue to learn from the place I live so that it my make my college experience even more successful
To get there:
  • Spend time thinking about school (other then when at school)
  • Take assignments more seriously and try to see them more in depth
  • Show care and compassion to the people I love and help them understand me and my goals

Thursday, November 29, 2012

Literature Analysis #5

A Christmas Carol:
by Charles Dickens

General:
1. A Christmas Carol is a story about the life of Ebenezer Scrooge, an old man riddled with hate for anything material and does not look to bring pleasure upon anyone else but himself with his money. We start the story by watching Scrooge's horrible attitude to even "friends". The inciting incident is when Marley, one of Scrooge's old business friends who was so consumed by material wealth that when he passed away his afterlife was to be spent prowling the world in heavy chains. Marley decides to save Scrooge from this fate by sending scrooge to three different spirits, Christmas Past, Christmas Present, and Christmas Yet to Come. Each of the ghosts lead on to a important parts in Scrooge's life, showing him the things he's done, and the things he is doing. When Scrooge see's his future, he realizes that his life was not worth living if he just let his own riches run his life. He was sent back to his home, and accepted the morals and virtues of Christmas, sharing his wealth and spending time with those who mattered. 

2. The them of the story is to not get so caught up in your life to forget what matters the most. Sometimes we pay to much attention to school and sports that we lose track of what is really important, and that is the love of those around you, and to love those people who love you. Showing gratitude is just a simple step, though significant, to showing Scrooge's change in his life.

3. The whole story is contained by dark images and somber people. The fact that poverty has struck London and that all of the characters seem to live on the line, Scrooge's outlook on those people seem condescending throughout the entire story. This doesn't not stop until Scrooge is pitiful in the end, but the author still notes that London is still racked with poverty and that people are still getting sick and live with nothing.

4. In the story, the author uses similes to describe things that have no significance, so similes were used, but rare in the important parts of the story. The other used his speech as an aphorism, explaining his ideas on life through the ghosts in the story. He uses a kind of rhetoric speech to say that those who are wealthy, but do not share, are selfish, and those who do, are more happy and well off. The other was very good at drawing out pathos. The reader felt pity for Scrooge as the story went on, not really hatred anymore, just a realization of a lost man, in need of love and help. 

Characterization:
1. Two examples of direct characterization are when Scrooge meets the second ghost and the author describes him as "clear minded and kind". Another example is when the third ghost comes near to Scrooge and the author writes that Scrooge was "filled with dread". Two examples of indirect characterization are: Describing Scrooge, "Nobody ever stopped him in the street to say, with gladsome looks, ``My dear Scrooge, how are you. When will you come to see me.'' and another example is, "His hands were busy with his garments all this time: turning them inside out, putting them on upside down, tearing them, mislaying them, making them parties to every kind of extravagance." showing the excitement and nervousness.

2. When describing Scrooge's dreams with the spirits, Dickens wrote in long descriptive sentences, with little dialogue, to give it a quiet, yet extravagant scenery. During the wake of Scrooge's real life, the syntax is with short sentences full of dialogue. The story switches in between the two for when he is witnessing the ghosts and talking to those in real life.

3. As A Christmas Story is well known, Scrooge's tale is that of an extremely dynamic character. The story is simply about how Scrooge came to notice the importance of life and caring during Christmas, and how he changed his ways to a kind-hearted and generous man.

4. I felt like it was someone that I was witnessing something with, not so much that i was meeting him or talking to him, but a fly on the wall, watching as Scrooge realizes things that pass by. Many of his surprises and heartfelt fears were very close to anything that would have scared anyone else outside of the story. We never want our flaws pointed out, and Scrooge acted, as I think, anyone else would.

Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Literature Analysis #4

The Scarlet Letter
by Nathaniel Hawthorne

General:
1. Hester Prynn, an unfortunate lover, was sent to America with her daughter, without the father ever meeting them in the new world. Hester's lonely travels in America led her to have an affair. The story begins explaining the meaning of the red A that Hester wears upon her chest to show that she has been marked as an adulteress. Though Hester is heckled and ridiculed, she is charitable and kind to the community, and therefore the community develops a bond with Hester and her daughter. As things seem to go smoothly, Chillingworth, the father disguised as a medicinal man, becomes close with Hester and the authorities of the village. Dimmesdale is then watched over by Chillingworth, who is secretly planning to kill the man, but first to expose him as the man that Hester had loved. Dimmesdale's distress and urgency, because he is a preacher, leads him to an unbearable discovery at the end of the story in front of the town, where he dies upon the scaffold that introduced at the very beginning.

2. The theme is to develop relationships that can not so easily be taken from you. Hester's relationship with Dimmesdale was strong, but could have led to the downfall of both of them, as it was revealed in the end. The relationships that are developed for your own personal gain or lust are most of the time those relationships that are not meant to be made.

3. Hawthorne uses a tone that is unlike any other story I've read. His ability to write in a dreamy tone is entertaining. The characters are often thinking in their own minds of possibilities to come, while the others are trying to discover the present. When Hester and Pearl are in the forest, the reader is able to discern real from unreal, but can understand the emotions of love and lust, confusion and uneasiness. These are elements that make Hawthorne a good writer.

4. The author uses implication very often when  Hester reacts with other characters. Her scarlet A is seen and the characters reactions to that imply that Hester is a sinful person. Foreshadowing is used many times in the story. It is used to reveal her lover, used to reveal her husband, and used to eventually reveal the babies true father. Hyperbole is used when describing Pearl as a nymph, little devil, or an angel, her actions and looks are all exaggerated by the author. Hawthorne also uses surrealism, which can be seen in the forest scenes and when viewing Pearl.

Characterization:
1. Direct characterization would most likely be connected with Hester. Other's in the story describe Hester as a sinner. But I think that this is put in the story to show the indirect characterizations of the person so that the reader can see the obvious discernment between the people and Hester.

2. When describing the important characters in the story, I notice that you can divide them from the normal cast by noticing the change in syntax. The descriptions of the characters also seem to change in diction, for the characters become more animated by the writing and the sentences are long and descriptive so that you may judge the character, similar to how the people in the story judge her. Simply by face value.

3. Hester could be described as static, or dynamic, it all depends on the point of view. Hester doesn't change the way her actions show to people, in order to deceive them, and keep the writing of the story more engaging. On the inside, Hester becomes more in love with the man she had an affair with as she tries to first avoid him. The contact with him is the point where she decides to be more assertive with her ideals.

4. I could feel for the characters in the story. We have all experienced secrecy, but may not to these extremes. Hester's feelings of sorrow and regret fuel the reader with feelings that are of empathy, because the reader understands mistakes. Though Hester has done a terrible thing, the audience feels that she is just acting out of emotion and that her side is pure in intent. It is hard to break  your ideas away from a character that you are exposed to for the entire story.